It’s always helpful to receive such an honest feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read my story , and I promise to work harder on my grammar and typing ^^
@doa_imagination Hello thank you for your kind consideration, But i kindly suggest you work on your typings. Im so sorry if this offends you. I did read the story and it's Good! But your typings are just a bit off for me. If you want to improve your typings i suggest you look on some popular great stories here on wattpad and you will eventually see how you can attract more people to read and like your story. Ty!