lillian eston

@Realaee you’re welcome <3 and of course I don’t mind, you are the writer so if you feel like it would be better you could, though I’ve seen authors alternate between both POVs so that could be also something I’d suggest doing, depending on what you will write in a certain chapter or part of one :) It’s just a suggestion you don’t have to do it, I’m used to reading third POV too.

@MidniightShadow thank you, that means so much more to me than you'd think, also, would it be okay with you if I changed the first person POV into third person? I feel like although that's outside my comfort zone, I could go more in detail and give you a more concise view of what I'm trying to portray

Oh it’s okay then, I was actually waiting for the next chapter since I found your story interesting. But I understand your thinking and I’ll wait for the updated version! :)