@HarukiUsagi46 Thank you for blocking me. Its my understanding that this is an open forum where readers are allowed their thoughts. Because you block me I will not make the mistake opening up any more of your stories. I read so many, sometimes I forget their online name. I will also inform my friends since we share these stories with each other about how you address constructive criticism. Also, I have two published books The Eyes of the Heart and the Voices of the heart by McGhie. I learned how to accept criticism when my editor ripped my first book apart with the editing process. My books can be purchased at Barnes and Noble and Amazon on line. Good luck in your future endeavors.