@lighter5 hello again. As promised I read your books both of them. I really love the idea you have for them. Fearless, rich and slightly intitled heroines. They would make for an interesting read. But beware of making them immature and spoilt brats. The idea of women who have it all meeting that one guy who is not easy and unable to love and making that passion burn is a must read. Also try not to rush your book, dont let a lot happen in one chapter , that will make the story end quickly and leave readers unsatisfied. I really feel your idea is a one of those we wont be able to stop until we finish the book. Im still an amateur and have a lot to learn but my main advice is never give up on your story.