I love the story! It’s so unique!! And green!! (If you know what I mean, lol) I also love how the story is placed together! It’s so organized and easy to understand and read! Your grammar is also amazing as well!! I also LOVE the moral of the story!! There is one thing though, you should add more details to the characters. Add more character into the character (lol) and add more personalities!! But overall, I literally LOVE the novel!!