@lilsomthin I just read a bit of the first chapter, but I havent read the whole book. Everything is moving Very quickly. I feel like we hardly know these characters and yet the MC is already almost best friends with them
Describe the atmosphere, put detail into the smallest of things. Rule of thumb, if it's a small event then write more. Large event, write less.
And have Bella, the MC, stand up for herself and dont let her fall into line just to please others so they 'pick her'