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I've been sick . Had a bad stomach bug. Still not feeling back to myself. I was so excsited to have holiday so I could focus on writing, instead, I been in my bed for days.

Merry Christmas you all, or anything else you may celebrate (I myself celebrate Jul)  I hope you all have a good day woth the people you love and lots of gifts. 
          
          Also I almost done with next chapter, only need to spellcheck it. I expect to have it out in a couple of days.

I was on the news yesterday. Nothing importent just a short interview.

New chapter out

I am thinking of changing my cover back to the one Lyne made, I like it better than my own.

I am so tired of my grammar program it keeps changeing Locklan, to lachlan.

Did you guys know there is a kind of siren called Lorelei? I just found out that exists.  That would be some plot twist, that Lorelei's name is not her name, but what she is. 
          
          This is, however, not what I have planned for my story. But you know a cool head canon you all can think about until I reveal it. Which is quite far away

You cant always trust google translate, as it says curtsies means no. 
          
          it tranaslated the english curtsies  to the Danish no(nej)
          But also when I tried danish to english nejer was No.

So I am editing the next chapter going really well. But their is something I have to re-write, as I wrote it with Clovis there, but it dosent make sense since he is a city guard, not a royal guard, so I had to make a new character instead. His name is Cawil. Cawill have also been added into an earlyer chapter, for the once I editied will be released soon. 
          
           For you readers that scene is going to seem very insignifigent. But it matters. for something later in the story. 
          
          
          This is the original scene I am deleting. 
          
          
           "I am doing better, and would not want to miss the wedding."
          
          "I see, glad to hear that. But you should not exhausted yourself. It be shame if you do not heal properly" Clovis walks alway.
          
          "That was weird," Locklan says. "What happened to him?" I ask. Locklan scowls at me. "He had a dagger thrown into his leg the other night." Oh I get it, I was what happened to him. Well he seems fine as he walks up the floor.  I guess it wasn't as deep as I thought,

Its interesting going through old notes from my story, I found the original,
          
          In the original version, at the brothel, it was not the twins that was suppouse to be caught, but Lorelei. and Valor had lied about being Duke Teival. And he gets Duke Teival to pretend to be him. Yeah it wouldnt really make sense, since you know their race dosent match up. 
          
          and when Lorelei finds out he is the prince, and he says he would give her anything, she says she wants to be queen(asking for the most impossible thing so that he will give up on her)