I don’t know if anyone will see this, but I don’t suggest people read “The hero” I really don’t. I’m
not saying this for pity, but the originality is just..not there. It is in some parts, but I don’t find that okay. Reading it just makes me CRINGE. I took notes from a lot of comments I saw and used my actual brain to write and make my own events on the new stories I’ve been writing, not referencing Steven Universe or Frozen (that was just horrible) ‘Shiro’ wasn’t an actual reference to Voltron, I saw several comments calling that out. I do thank the people who were honest with the story, good or bad opinions, it helps a lot. My stories aren’t perfect or god-like, but I hope to get better than that first book.