So hello, I'm actually in the process of reading your story and just thought that I had to come over and commend you on the simple brilliance of 'Alliance'. I imagine it is very technical to write such a story with rhymes and not much paragraphs of descriptions, yet with words you capture every single thing - every emotion so I'm not going to describe it as simple.
I have never seen an actual poetic story and maybe that's why I'm in such awe, but I tell you, it's like a breath of fresh air. It deserves so much more eyes! I hope you get that.
Stay blessed! Have a good day!
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