thanks :) !! glad ur liking it :) ...
and yea.. even a few other ppl have told me to be more descriptive ... i need to work on dat :P ... i thot id write down what happens, and leave the rest, like the looks of the character n all, for the readers to choose..... for eg, the kinda character i want judah to look , is a cute innocent teen ..!! .. so i thot each reader wud imagine him cute in their own way .. u know ? ... coz if they DONT really find my description of his looks adorable, den id mess it up :P ....
lol but i guess ur rite, i shud be more descriptive... probably thats wat makes the reader picturise it better..
n thanks for reading :) ... do leave ur suggestions or anything u wud like to say as a comment :D