Hello! I’m writing a story called The Twelve Kingdoms. I was wondering if you could give me any advice or tell me if my story is interesting or not. Here is the description: Twelve different kingdoms, Twelve different types of people or so they thought. Each zodiac sign has its own kingdom. Families are being split apart and innocent lives are constantly being taken. King Vaughn of the Aries kingdom has started a war that he believes will lead to a revolution. Twelve Kingdoms, twelve different sides of the war. Who will come out on top?
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