dramionesslut

Heyy:)) i really like your book so far but if you don't mind it I would like to give you some advice! Your writing is good but you shouldn't write stuff like "you know" or "whatever" you should write more neutral. And some sentences are a bit rushed, you should take your time with the writing (writing is really hard ik). I don't want this to sound mean or smth but I like givinv new authors advices<3

dramionesslut

@dramionesslut + you also wrote smth like "this is my Outfit" which is also not really correct, like yes ofc you can show the outfit ( I love it when authors do that) but don't write stuff you use in a conversation :)) 
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