ariesduo

Hi!! Would you like to take a look in my friend's story? Hope you like it and give us your opinion about it please!
          https://my.w.tt/BbsCHpK3rL

little_pyscho

@Sofiasof13 tell your friend that there story is really good but to make it even better try adding some more suspense or move the story at a bit of a faster pace.
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