littlechocolatte

So I may not be a popular or award-winning writer or anything close to it ( im just a random amateur writer still in highschool but doesn't know the ×8 multiplication timetable) BUT if u want me to review your work or just want some advice or constructive criticism from a reader's point of view, feel free to post it here in the conversation section. In school, I would also help my classmates proofread and comment on their essays so this is nothing new to me.
          	
          	U may be a random stranger, a newbie writer, an aspiring writer, or something else, but if u want me to review ur work, I WILL REVIEW IT.
          	
          	Hv a nice day ;)
          	

SereinChoo

Thank you so much for adding ZuoMeng: To Dream to your reading list. I really am thankful for that ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧ Please continue to support me ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧Votes, comments and share are appreciated

littlechocolatte

@SereinChoo no problem! (≧▽≦) I hope your love for writing such stories will not waver 
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littlechocolatte

So I may not be a popular or award-winning writer or anything close to it ( im just a random amateur writer still in highschool but doesn't know the ×8 multiplication timetable) BUT if u want me to review your work or just want some advice or constructive criticism from a reader's point of view, feel free to post it here in the conversation section. In school, I would also help my classmates proofread and comment on their essays so this is nothing new to me.
          
          U may be a random stranger, a newbie writer, an aspiring writer, or something else, but if u want me to review ur work, I WILL REVIEW IT.
          
          Hv a nice day ;)
          

may_bornmia

Hey, love! Would you mind reading and reviewing my book? It could help me improve my writing significantly. 
          Here's the link:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/236836702-7-and-a-half-wishes-%C2%BB-bangchan 
          Have a lovely day! :D

littlechocolatte

@may_bornmia hii ive actually read this book somewhere last yr and im trying to recall how the story goes. If u want my review: I feel like ur chemistry development between ur characters are much better than mine, no joke. Ur book is pretty decent compared to some fanfics ive read. This book is quite heartwarming to me, but I think u should do a little bit more research. Researching a little more can also contribute to ur general knowledge. I hv nothing to comment on ur writing since I can't find any mistakes with it. 
            
            If u like writing, continue doing it. Pour ur heart and soul and effort into it. Even tho authors will never be satisfied with their works and will cringe when they look back, I hope ull never delete any works u find unsatisfactory, because some people might find joy in it.
            
            Hv a nice day! :)
            
            
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