littlekittycat101

I wrote my first charatcher of my first book yesterday I have no idea if it is good or not I would really love it if someone could read it and tell me what they think of it and what I have done wrong 

Marco_Laffra

Hey, would you like to check out my "Don't Cry...Tonight"? I'd be very glad to receive your opinions about my short poems, so feel free to  comment and vote if you want to :) 
          Then, as soon as possible, i will  comment and vote your works in return :)