littletash23

I have just put up a new story called: The story of Bailey Thornton. It's a Harry Potter story. If anyone has any ideas for improvement or comments about what they think, please tell me or message me and I shall work on it.

littletash23

Hi,
          
          If I posted a story I've started writing based in the Harry Potter world... would anyone read it? I've had a few of my close friends read it and they've enjoyed what I've written so far. 
          If anyone did read it, they would be more than welcome to send me a message and tell me where I'm going wrong.