Liv

@1800feelings  no no it’s okay I appreciate the advice and I’ll correct my mistakes because I’m like that when I read a book, but I didn’t realise until someone like yourself pointed it out. Thank you x

Hey! This might be a personal preference but I like to have the aesthetics and everything else separate from the prologue. Another preference is shorter paragraphs and a little more of the characters thoughts and words rather than just their actions. I’ve realized throughout writing my book expressing character’s thoughts the more open you let yourself be when writing. (Nothing I said was meant to be rude by the way)