livinblack_

yall im redoing the story again I hate this version so much

JonettaHouston3

@livinblack_  it's okay whatever you cook up I know it's gonna be good pls I hope all is well and your having a good year again can't wait
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livinblack_

incase you don’t follow my tiktok!
          
          after a lot of thinking, i've decided to take down fallons and joshuas and rewrite it from the beginning.
          
          i love this story and these characters, but i've realised it isn't turning out the way i originally imagined. i know i can make it better, so i've decided to start over and give it the version it deserves.
          
          i'll be switching from 1st person to 3rd person, as first person has been making me uncomfortable, but also I will be improving the pacing, adding more detail, rewriting scenes, and making the story flow better overall. the main plot will stay the same, but the story itself will be much closer to my original vision.
          
          thank you so much for all the support so far. i hope you'll stick around for the rewritten version ♡