Domi

just updated my story check it out :)
          

Just published a new story in the spirit of the holidays :)

https://twitter.com/_living2worlds/status/650750070120431622 check out my story and don't forget to vote and suscribe xx
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Just posted first chapter of a new story

I guess I'm working on something, I hope it turns out great. Watch this space.

thanks for the advice :) I will try to act on it 

Heyo your story is good  I really enjoyed it. But when a new person speaks always start with a new line as it makes it much easier to read rather than being bundled up together. Look at other writes writing structure for tips