I hope I don’t bug you or anything, but a friend of mine on here is trying to rewrite her novel, and wants people to give her some honest criticism first before taking it off. She’s just trying to improve some of her writing techniques.
If you don’t want to read it, that’s fine, but if you do, you don’t have to read the whole thing. Just enough to give your opinion would be good.
It’s an original teen fiction story with slight adult themes (but it’s not about sex or anything like that). It just talks about mature things and has topics like murder, abuse, and drug/alcohol use. I can understand if that’s not your cup of tea, but I think her plot is outstanding.
Thank you anyway for your time. I hope you give it the benefit of the doubt. It would help/mean a lot to the both of us! ❤️
https://my.w.tt/WeYuzUqEtZ