
walkingindawind
Hey ive been reading LIP sinve you started and i think the reboot was a good idea. However, i don't think lack of characters was a big problem but how fast the affair came and went. It wasn't really sneaky times together and we didn't get the falling in love stuff mentioned in the intro piece, before it seemed like they were gonna be outed at the party. So that's just my 2 cents. Excited to see what changes these new characters will bring

liwrites
Well when I originally wrote this story it was with J.Cole! And it was so much different, I wanted it to be exactly like that, but I lost majority of the chapters Before the affair began, and I think I rushed the affair so quickly in this one - I'm going correct that with the updates! And the added characters gives an extra boost PLUS there is a surprise coming up with the reboot that will be really interesting, it's gonna add the sneaky factor with the affair. I think that with what I have in mind now I'll be able to finish this story.
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