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just put the old chapters up still not done updating
liyahhhluvvv
just put the old chapters up still not done updating
liyahhhluvvv
currently crying because I deleted the chapter I was writing and can’t recover it.
liyahhhluvvv
updated: chapter two❤️
liyahhhluvvv
updated: playlist & aesthetic + chapter one❤️
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please read
chapters with bold titles are updated❤️
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continuation:
i always wanted to see more of me in the media. it would be hypocritical for me not to have my main character to be a black character. black women will never stop needing representation in the media. whether it’s in a movie or book. it’s so important to have black female leads who not only go through “the typical black struggle” but the everyday struggles.
liyahhhluvvv
hey you guys I will be starting this book over. the plot will pretty much be the same but im adding in a lot of new things. I’ve been re writing for the last month. I have word docs filled with character descriptions and traits. There’s also a lot of grammar issues and things that don’t add up in the book. The main difference is Liliana being black. Also jacks character is not how I truly envisioned him to be. Hopefully you guys like the new version. I promise the updates will be more frequent. The last chapter was not my best. The reason is because I didn’t really like what I was writing. So if you decide to continue reading please read the book like a new book. Don’t expect certain things to happen because they may change. If you choose not to continue reading thank you for the support. I know 100% this version will be better than the last. I want to build on the characters and their fame. Also their mafia involvement. I’m currently doing a chapter outline to see where I want the book to end. So far it’s been 3 different endings. Keep in mind I am a full student and I have a job. These take up alot of my time. But there will be new aesthetics and everything. Thank you guys for the continuous support. Enjoy the new era of Fighting desires. I will be remove all old parts of the story and updating from the beginning. It’s all going to be worth it. I read what you guys had to say and will implement it in the book. Love liyah❤️ Stay tuned
liyahhhluvvv
So I put a NEW CHAPTER out but I will delete tomorrow morning. Don’t expect a lot from this chapter it’s not good.
MangoSmoothie3
@liyahhhluvvv also if you have writers block I can help with ideas if you need any!
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MangoSmoothie3
@liyahhhluvvv aww why is it deleted? Also will jack ever find out Abt lily's mental health issues? Take your time though ❤️
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liyahhhluvvv
how would you guys feel if Lily was black?!
kiara_r27
I’m not bothered by what she looks like, I’d assume you’d have to go back and change all of her images for new readers.
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wtf_omfg
@liyahhhluvvv it shouldn't bother people on what race she is. There needs to be mote black mc.
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