lizabeth_02

I updated!

Just updated!! Me book

thanks for voting on my story!
          
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Hello! The names Jariah but you can call me Riah, I was wondering if you could read my new book 'Uncontrollable'

Thank you for taking the time to vote and read my story it means a lot to me

Thank you so much for the votes!! They made my day!

Your story does need some more tuning, uhh you um need to show more emotion. You also need to ration out explaining a action and feeling a action. Her brother and parents just died right in front of her, go into details about how she feels don't just say she sobbed and felt a pang in her chest then went to Luke's house 

Thank you for reading and voting on my book, 'My brothers best friend is my mate. Oh no.' Hope you like it!
          
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