XxRiah916Xx

I updated!

lizabeth_02

@XxRiah916Xx  awwwww that sucks. I hope you don't! 
Ответить

XxRiah916Xx

@XxRiah916Xx I updated! But now I'm thinking of taking the book down. I'm nor getting as much readers 
Ответить

lizabeth_02

Omg yay I love your book!
Ответить

XxRiah916Xx

Just updated!! Me book

XxRiah916Xx

Hello! The names Jariah but you can call me Riah, I was wondering if you could read my new book 'Uncontrollable'

lizabeth_02

@XxRiah916Xx  I loved it! Can't wait for the next one;)
Ответить

XxRiah916Xx

@XxRiah916Xx Awww tysm! How did you like the update?
Ответить

Babyb_xo

Thank you for taking the time to vote and read my story it means a lot to me

lizabeth_02

Your welcome! Your book is really good!
Ответить

dividiv

Thank you so much for the votes!! They made my day!

lizabeth_02

Thankyou for writing such a wonderful book! 
Ответить

--Mystical--Sensei--

Your story does need some more tuning, uhh you um need to show more emotion. You also need to ration out explaining a action and feeling a action. Her brother and parents just died right in front of her, go into details about how she feels don't just say she sobbed and felt a pang in her chest then went to Luke's house 

lovergirl00530

Thank you for reading and voting on my book, 'My brothers best friend is my mate. Oh no.' Hope you like it!
          
          XOXO
          -M