ljosephshosty

Chapter Two is up.
          	
          	Been a while since this one got an update.  I tried writing a better chapter two for this story, but it turns out I got it right the first time.  Chapter three might be getting a facelift, though.  Basic concern is, if I'm going to write a western, I want gunplay at some point.
          	
          	Anyway, a recap.  In the first chapter, Brooks and Guerney are still recovering from having operated a machine that allows them to peer millions of years into the past.  In chapter two, we learn more about these men and their mysterious employer, Professor Thirlby.
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/217311424-pawpawsaurus

TheSmellOfHome

I noticed you noticed my new poetry >u>
          Don't feel you need to be a quiet observer, and of course if you're too intimidated you can always hold my hand~ 
          
          P.s. that means I'm greedy and wants feedback >:3

ljosephshosty

@TheSmellOfHome Silly wolf girl. I was thinking of private messaging you with comments, but I don't want to intrude on your page. That's a space for you and your friends. But I will definitely send feedback!
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ljosephshosty

Chapter Two is up.
          
          Been a while since this one got an update.  I tried writing a better chapter two for this story, but it turns out I got it right the first time.  Chapter three might be getting a facelift, though.  Basic concern is, if I'm going to write a western, I want gunplay at some point.
          
          Anyway, a recap.  In the first chapter, Brooks and Guerney are still recovering from having operated a machine that allows them to peer millions of years into the past.  In chapter two, we learn more about these men and their mysterious employer, Professor Thirlby.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/217311424-pawpawsaurus

ljosephshosty

Chapter 3 of Gomes: In a County Most Fair is up.  Detectives Gomes and Bally meet up with Lt. Reyes, the officer in charge of the Greens Point Changeling case.  There's conflict on the horizon for the lieutenant and Gomes from the moment they meet.  If they're not careful, their personality clashes could jeopardize the case.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/217427002-gomes-in-a-county-most-fair

ljosephshosty

Chapter Seven is up.
          
          Achilles and Swiss accompany Ugly Phil and a party of Mods to retrieve the shipment of alien booze thrown down from orbit by a smuggler vessel.  However, the weather has been unkind, making it difficult to locate something that should have created a blast crater when it landed instead of plunging, and disappearing, into muck.  Luckily, our favorite robot might have an answer for that.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/217303596-present-value-achilles-swiss-2

ljosephshosty

Chapter two is up. It's a little short, but that's what happens when you cut five hundred words from a 1,700-word chapter. Too much needless exposition. What's left is lean, mean, and exactly what I want to say on the subject. Enjoy.
          
          Avram Ghul arrives at The Maze to learn some exciting events have occurred near The Havenstone the night before, but it's the reason for his visit to The Maze that's the strange part.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/178365235-consider-her-bones