llamalanaa

Hey  guys sorry I haven't been updating for awhile I promise I will soon probably next week. My depression has been getting worse and trust me I want to update but the past few weeks has been very hard. I'm pretty sure that I will update next week though so thanks for everyone who has been waiting.

raven_donna130

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@lanaladao I know how u feel its ok to be depression sometimes but just try to find something that u remember that made u super happy that's what I do. I used to cut myself but no I'm cut free. I tried to kill myself do many times but failed. I don't want to get in ur business and all but try to find that moment that touch ur heart or made you happy and I'm so very so if I make it worse for you, but knowing ppl do care for you they just don't show it. (I've learned the hardest way.) remember though n u can always talk to me if u feel depressed. I may not know you but I'm here if you need me. :) btw good job on broken mate it really touched me. keep up the good work. n I hope that u will be happy again :)
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CallMeDevil-

@lanaladao Hey! :) Hope you feel better soon. Take your time.
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oreosandcream99

@lanaladao also I wanted to say that you are an amazing writer and I have become captivated by your story the broken mate so I hope you feel better soon and take as long as you like and you don't need to apologise
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PageTurnersPen

In The Broken Mate I posted a comment with improved dialogue for the scene in the hospital just before she woke up. ( I read it after posting and spell check must have changed a few words or something. What I typed needs slight editing. )
          
           The dialogue after she woke up could be improved too, but I'm not sure just what to say and still keep the story on your intended trajectory. I do think it can be improved though.