velvetynekiss

Dont worry i can handle it

llekel

@velvetynekiss id say your first chapter is a success. Minor writing issues that i feel will get worked out as the story grows. I know your main character is 16. At what age do they get intimate? I was not sure what to expect... But i am somewhat impressed. Looking forward to more.
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velvetynekiss

hey do you mind reading my first story and tell me what im missing to get on prince kenzie's level? thank you

llekel

@velvetynekiss also.. Do you want feedback left as messages within the story itself.. Or should i message you. Btw.. Your first paragraph is one long sentence.
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llekel

@velvetynekiss some people say They want critique but can rarely handle it. I do not mind reading and offering my two cents.. As long as you realise they are my two cents and do not let it discourage you but rather encourage you to continue writing and get better.
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