lloydbenson

Thanks, I appreciate that

daniabawab

hey can you please help me gain followers and views

queeenstrong

I'll follow you @daniabawab (:
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lloydbenson

@daniabawab I would suggest changing the prelude to your story where you say its my first work and not so good, but you hope people like it. i would think you ought to say something positive about you work and why people should like it :)
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MetalHeadBoss

If I may say so myself, being a youngster of only 14,  you had (well, still have ; I mean, you're still alive) an interesting life indeed. I just love the type of story that you are writing ; non-fiction, real events from the real life of a real person.  I really hope that once I have reached the later stages of adulthood I will be able to do just that - share the stories of my seemingly 'typical' life. Because we all have some interesting tales to tell.
          
          That's all, just wanted to say that here.

lloydbenson

@MetalHeadBoss Thanks for the comment and for the follow, I appreciate that.
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