llziall

Happy new year to everyone

zainabasgharkhan

To you too :)
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llziall

Sorry to all my followers for the recent unfollow... I didn't freaking mean to do it, i have  no intentions in unfollowing any of you unless you aren't following me. 
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          It was just my phone crashed and so this happened..... 
          
          I apologize.. M soo freaking sorry

heypragatisingh

@princessnazia awwww Koi nahi
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winter810

Hey! Thanks for the follow :) 
          I read ur book CURSE or COINCIDENCE. So far the plot is good, a few grammar mistakes here and there. I would suggest some tips if u like, though m not a writer :P
          Please update it soon!!

winter810

@princessnazia your welcome :) ❤️
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llziall

@winter810 aww... Thank you sooo freaking much, 5hats really helpful. I'll keep that in mind
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winter810

Suggestions 
            1) Try to break ur paragraphs, they are way too long. Make them smaller, like how u did in chapter 14
            2) Don't use short forms, its a book.....not a text msg (sorry if this appears rude) 
            3) It is confusing to read when there isn't proper punctuation. But, experience will make u a better writer. It's ok if there are mistakes.....just learn from them and make the next chapters better. It's understandable that its ur first book.....im helping u to make it perfect.
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agatharoza

"1D and a Swiftie" ♥ yes! Me too XD  
          
          Hello there :) my name is Agatha ♡ thank you for following me now you're one of my angels ♡ and I'm following you back! ♡   
          
          PLEASE GIVE MY BOOK A CHANCE!! I really hope you would check my book The Bad Nerd Boy ♡ and I'll check yours! Just lemme know which ♡ and I'll put it in my daily schedule! ♡   Have a wonderful day! ♡

agatharoza

@princessnazia You're most welcome ♥  I'll be genuinely reading your book, meaning I really going to read, leave comments and vote! ♥ I hope you'll enjoy my book! ♥ have a wonderful day! ♥
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llziall

@AgathaRoza tysm... U r really sweeter thn sweet (bts song lyrics )
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agatharoza

I couldn't thank you enough for reading my book The Bad Nerd Boy! You're a true angel ♡ thank you for giving my book a chance ♡

llziall

@AgathaRoza its CRUSE or COINCIDENCE
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agatharoza

@princessnazia lemme know which book ♥
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llziall

@AgathaRoza np... Do read my book too....
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