whatThehmmm
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Hey author. I wanted to drop by say a few words of complete appreciation for your work and thank you for feeding the lmsy ff world. Like you are literally serving up a degustation menu at this stage with what appears to be no limit for the courses (perhaps this is me hoping). And your writing is sensational, cannot say it enough. This amongst some really really amazing authors that write some absolute bangers of lmsy ff. But you know what strikes me about your work - and maybe this is your signature move - is that besides my most fav lmsy being featured and is that you have entire spaces, inanimate objects, plants as “supporting characters” in their own right that I am invested in their story too. That’s wild for me. Let’s talk evidence of this observation (see what I did there - I just came off reading your recent chapter drop for sustained so please bear with me as I get that out my system)… btw be warned this going to turn into a bit of incoherent mess of a comment… please humour me and let’s keep going… back to the evidence…
Hate Adjacent - space: the dorm room, inanimate objects: the planner, post it notes, plant: greg the succulent
[Side note: this story was such a good read and first of your work I came across and devoured, I hope you bring it back. I read the original and then was part way through your revision. From this readers perspective, it felt like the true form of the story was somewhere in between the original and the revision.]
Chaos and Coffee - space: appartments 4B and 4C and the book store and at time the entire appartments building, inanimate objects: lm’s note books, plant: manuscript
[Side note: love this story too. Made me think that if the shows Friends and L Word (the original) made sweet love (and not war) and was all chill, and adult about life, then it would come in the form of Chaos and Coffee]
Ok I lied about the “few words” that was going to be this comment… it long long… so take this as part 1…
lmsycentric
I genuinely don’t know what to say except thank you. I read your comment more than once because I couldn’t believe someone noticed the little things I quietly put into my stories. The fact that you remembered Greg the succulent, the apartments, the notebooks, the manuscript, and even the spaces themselves honestly means the world to me. Thank you for taking the time to write not one, but two comments just to share your thoughts. Readers like you remind me why I love telling stories. I hope you continue to enjoy the next ones—including Split Down The Middle. Thank you, truly.
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whatThehmmm
Part 2…
One more try: space: dorm room, lecture theatre, the tree, the music room, inanimate object: the shirt,
Plant: the tree
Sustained: Room 1804, sy’s appartment
And lm’s appartment.
See it’s wild that list and also extensive. Some authors have character profiles as their lead in chapter tot heir work… you could literally include these as supporting characters.
And on that I will step away from your comments section and leave it as tidy as I had entered it. Oh and one more thing, I agree x 100 with positive and constructive comments that the other readers have left you. Thank you author for writing and sharing your work.
Good day to you, today and everyday.
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