localaquarius

the increase in authors using commas instead of quotation marks to show dialogue & the BLATANT soulless AI stories on here is disgraceful. i need that dislike button asap

localaquarius

@KiaWrotethat that’s what’s driving me crazy omg. but i was saying i hate this cause it’s getting too acceptable now! the ai mention was because i found a good description but the book was definitely AI so i was pissed lmao
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KiaWrotethat

@localaquarius yeahhh that’s not even ai, that just sounds like poor grammar. (‘ ‘) are  supposed to be used as a quotation within a quotation. Like when someone is talking and quoting what another person said. 
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localaquarius

like why is everything story written like this: 
          	  
          	  i got dressed as my phone ringed i picked it up ‘hey babe’ ‘hey i’m outside’ ‘ok here i come’ i hung up while i grabbed my shoes
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localaquarius

the increase in authors using commas instead of quotation marks to show dialogue & the BLATANT soulless AI stories on here is disgraceful. i need that dislike button asap

localaquarius

@KiaWrotethat that’s what’s driving me crazy omg. but i was saying i hate this cause it’s getting too acceptable now! the ai mention was because i found a good description but the book was definitely AI so i was pissed lmao
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KiaWrotethat

@localaquarius yeahhh that’s not even ai, that just sounds like poor grammar. (‘ ‘) are  supposed to be used as a quotation within a quotation. Like when someone is talking and quoting what another person said. 
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localaquarius

like why is everything story written like this: 
            
            i got dressed as my phone ringed i picked it up ‘hey babe’ ‘hey i’m outside’ ‘ok here i come’ i hung up while i grabbed my shoes
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localaquarius

no shade but i’m sick of the way people do age gaps on here! i’m just too grown to read about 18 year olds with 25-36 year olds and that’s what 85% of these books are now  why yall never wanna do age gaps between two people without TEEN in their age omg 

localaquarius

@mangocobbler i wanna see an agegap between two people over 25 for once 
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localaquarius

@mangocobbler right like i don’t mind it but why is it always a 17-19 year old changing grown ass men :/ 
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localaquarius

like brooo my brain is too developed to try and pretend that i can believe an 18 year old nice girl can “change” a 27 year old demon 
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localaquarius

nothing worse than finding a potentially good story only to see chris brown ugly ass as the mc/face claim :( 

localaquarius

@icannotseehoe like is there no other lightskin they find attractive?! i’ve bypasses like 50 stories because of this
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localaquarius

kills the vibe every time & it’s very traumatic for me to witness!!! 
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localaquarius

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small rant but every book somebody getting beat or cheated on…..literally 98% of the “urban” books includes this at least twice. like damn is this the only formula y’all know? y’all don’t like happiness, joy, fluff, ANYTHING GOOD?!? whole book is just mfers fighting and breaking up, just for the main characters to still end up together happily ever after and i feel like we can reach this goal without the extra bullshit!! i love mess as much as anyone but it’s getting weird now. if you can’t write drama outside of infidelity or abuse (which isn’t drama TBFH) then it’s time to reevaluate babes……

icannotseehoe

you ain’t never lied
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nyarmani

finally somebody said it. it’s weird!!
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localaquarius

no black supernatural, black fantasty/sci-fi, slow burns, funny story, mysterious stories…just a hood/rude nigga with an innocent/traumatized girl. & that’s just in the romance tag…. annoying 
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localaquarius

i wish i knew how to write properly because i have so many book ideas on my head :/ 

localaquarius

aw…i was just thinking about it but y’all got me thinking fr! ok lemme plot this 
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ChanelDior01

Right just put it out there!!! You have to start somewhere boo
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nenewritesometimes

love just start and ur writing will get better as you grow, but first u need to put it out there
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localaquarius

i’m tired of looking at locals so uhhh drop your instagrams :) while i’m feeling generous:) 

localaquarius

@CHIEFKEEFS ok honestly that just gave me chills
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NEEGAMUSIC

@localaquarius they gon make you vegan bitch
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localaquarius

@CHIEFKEEFS also i followed mine is @/angellel_ or however many underscores i put 
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