Hay megs!! Your story is good (my first music teacher) but don't you think everything is happening too fast? Be a bit more describing and stretch every little word. Let your inner writer come out. I know you can. Take the friendships and relationships slower. Let her just be the "new girl" for a while.
thank you so much. I'm really new at this thing and it means a lot that you love my books. I've also just started high school and update as soon as I can