lolachanningmoi

Lovelies, thank you to you all who have voted and commented on the French girl.
          	I've finished the cover for book two and the book will be up soon.

lolachanningmoi

I would like to thank all you lovelies for taking the time to vote and/or comment. You are seriously awesome. Has to be said. 
          
          Also, I am horribly behind on book two "the white knight walks back". Please bear with me. It will be worth it.  In the meanwhile, I will start posting another WIP "the nina ricci girl" a millennial romance and "giselle" a kinda paranormal fairy tale thing. 
          
          Danke schön you wonderful people. Really.

lolachanningmoi

Thank you! I just posted an update on book two. Taking longer than expected. But I have two other almost finished tales I will post in the mean time. Thank you again! Your sincere writer
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18erose

Constructive criticism:
          Your book is amazinggggg. I have some pointers though, as a reader I can't quite tell when it changed perspective or if the paragraph or chapter is from a different time zone so things have confused me quite a bit. Paragraphs are also frequent the not frequent during chapters so if possible it would be great if when and if you got the chance you could do that. Other than my own personal confusion your book "the French girl" is great.

18erose

Ok thanks :)
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lolachanningmoi

@18erose thank you so much for the offer. I am almost finished with the final draft and would love for you to read through it once before I publish. I will let you know :)
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18erose

@LolaChanning90  no problem hopefully it helps and if you need help editing I can lend a hand
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18erose

Good reading list, I like your profile.

lolachanningmoi

@18erose  it is an historical romance ;)
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18erose

No problem, I haven't read the little princess but I have seen the movie and it is a heartbreaker. I'm a sucker for classics as well but I haven't read some in quite a while. Your book looks interesting the name caught my attention because I thought it was historical. :)
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lolachanningmoi

Thank you. I'm a sucker for classics. I'm re-reading the little princess which I read as a child. I loved it then. I love it now. :)
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incroyablegirl

I have just read the preface and I am intrigued. Thanks for sharing your story.

lolachanningmoi

I am almost done with book two. Well, a few more weeks. For me, that is 'almost' :)
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incroyablegirl

Hey Lola,
            Welcome and it was my pleasure to read it. It is absolutely interesting that I sometimes even forget to vote in favour of reading more. Eagerly waiting for more.
            
            Thanks, same here.
            I really like your name. It is very pretty.
            :)
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lolachanningmoi

I like your bio on wattpad. Very sweet.
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