@lolarose13
Hiii❤ I've seen you comment on a few books i l love and I've just decided to write my own, it's called Miscommunication. I was just wondering if you'd read it? I would reallllllyyyy love to hear your opinion or like any feedback❤❤ please vote if you enjoy!!
Aw that's ok! I really love your story so far, and I hope more people discover you! :) <3
Hey there :)
Could you please read my story sticky toes and tell me what you think ?
Thank yoooouuu
( also natural selection if you enjoy it :)))
@lolarose13 thanks :) it's in the next chapter so that will be cleared but "seniors" are usually 16-17 as its their last two years of high school. And her form of swearing is apart of her character, so I'm not sure I can really change it much. Thanks for the advice tho :)
Hiya! You're off to a great start - I really think it's got the potential to be super funny and engaging :)
Just a couple of things:
Might wanna clear up how old they are? I realise this is Australian but in the UK year 11 and 'seniors' are sometimes seen as different things. I guess they're like 16? :/
Also the way she curses is kinda ott and unrealistic. Like I get the whole not-swearing thing, but maybe tone it down a bit?
But those are just suggestions! Srsly, it looks awesome and I've added it to my library! :)
@writebystarlight that's ok! I'm really liking your story and Gen is just awesome ☺️
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Which is technically weird but it's normal, my middle name is «Crazy and weird person» (crazy in a good way, of course) so that should explain me following about 200 people.