lolarose13

@writebystarlight that's ok! I'm really liking your story and Gen is just awesome ☺️

glossary

haha Gen will be happy to hear that XP
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anisya_fjb

Hiii❤ I've seen you comment on a few books i l love and I've just decided to write my own, it's called Miscommunication. I was just wondering if you'd read it? I would reallllllyyyy love to hear your opinion or like any feedback❤❤ please vote if you enjoy!! 

HappilySinister

Hey there :) 
          Could you please read my story sticky toes and tell me what you think ? 
          Thank yoooouuu 
          ( also natural selection if you enjoy it :)))

HappilySinister

@lolarose13 thanks :) it's in the next chapter so that will be cleared but "seniors" are usually 16-17 as its their last two years of high school. 
            And her form of swearing is apart of her character, so I'm not sure I can really change it much. Thanks for the advice tho :)
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lolarose13

Hiya! You're off to a great start - I really think it's got the potential to be super funny and engaging :)
            Just a couple of things: 
            Might wanna clear up how old they are? I realise this is Australian but in the UK year 11 and 'seniors' are sometimes seen as different things.  I guess they're like 16? :/ 
            Also the way she curses is kinda ott and unrealistic. Like I get the whole not-swearing thing, but maybe tone it down a bit?
            But those are just suggestions! Srsly, it looks awesome and I've added it to my library! :)
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WaterLyli

Yes, I know, sometimes, I follow people for absolutely no reason simply because I'm bored and then I see somebody and I'm like:
          
          Oh, this is another profile, let me click the following button for fun!
          
          Which is technically weird but it's normal, my middle name is «Crazy and weird person» (crazy in a good way, of course) so that should explain me following about 200 people.