lollolgirl

Update!!!!!!

I'm sorry and don't get me wrong this book is good but you spelling is horrible and I would like for you to update but if you are not 10 and you are just trying to make a book well you need to learn how not to type like you're 10 cause you are sure fooling some of us and you should take this as a lesson not as me just hating cause who dafuq would hate you and you ratchet ass story no offense 

@TheOneThatGot__Away .true shit this book would be good but it seems like it's been written by a 10 year old who the fuck raised this child that is trying to make porn on Watt pad  

I'm sorry but, I kinda want to see what happens. Cuz I was laughing my butt off, no offence. It was really strait forward. I like this story.

@procrastinate HAHAHAHAHA I'M SORRY BUT THAT MESSAGE JUST MADE MY LIFE HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAH OH GOD

I'm sorry but if you're going to put a story up then learn to spell properly, no hate just constructive criticism to help you :)

Do you really think wavy hair is spelled like "weavy hair" and it's I'm, notice the capitalization and apostrophe, notice I'm not writing it like "im". Learn to spell before you write the story, this would be a good story if I could understand half of the stuff that you're writing! 

Define cleverudge.

This is too ridiculous. please don't act like this "story" is even remotely well- written or enjoyable. @Louis_1Derful 

@Louis_1Derful Haters? We're not "hating". And we certainly aren't "jealous". Yeah, some people are pretty mean with the comments, but for MOST of us, we're giving contructive criticism and how to make the story better. -_-