lolthatrandomchick

You had become a fan of me a while back when I had written one of my earlier stories that I never finished :$ well this one I will defenitely be finishing and then will finish the first one

Hey I have a new story and I was hoping to get someone to read and give some criticism check it out http://www.wattpad.com/story/3550672-at-midnight
          
          At Midnight
          
          His lips pressed slowly against mine as we both let of the breath we’d been holding. His lips were soft and I could see how I could easily get addicted to this. Feeling my restraint slowly slipping I removed my lips from his receiving a reluctant sigh from him. I held his hand and led him to the balcony where we just stared at the beauty of the night with a half moon shining above. We looked into each other’s eyes with the silent agreement to be each other’s forever.

Hi I just started a story and would LOVE it if you could check it out and give me feedback! Thanks:) your awesome!

Hhola!

Haai, thanks for the fan; and LMAO you make me laugh with your TWIX comments ( I heart you now haha)

hey, thanks for the comment you left on my story, but I just wondered what 'AMAZING=TWIX' actually means??? :D

Twix is my favourite! :D

I'm curious, what's twix?

thnx for fanning me lol : )