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Author, are you revising the second book? Feeling ko, walang justice ang mga last chapters, including the fight of Crist and Alli. Why? It is too sudden. Parang yeah, you've just found out! The emotions are too unreal. Alam ni Alli ang sikreto ni Crist which he loves him more than a best friend because of that slipup when he fake sleeping. Then why the anger? Why the sudden implosion of exaggeration? Akala ko kalmado si Alli when they confront each other. Alli explained why he did that to Crist pero the emotions are no consistency among the lines. Here's one more sa chapter 37 to 38. It felt rush. Like putting it into one then it's the end of it. Maraming mistake sa plot. Daming plotholes actually. When the classmates asked Crist if he is gay. How come they knew it? Where's the gist of this all? Then, Dustin.He came out of nowhere. It was out of the blue when he was mentioned. The betrayal was too sudden in one point then at next moment he died. Pero seryoso, out of all this, I've got this feeling na nasa second part ng epilogue Ang lahat ng mga katanungan ko. It's more like Alli's pov had the answer of my questions.

Miss ko na si fino lolz

mizz u

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hi, author! I just want to thank you for writing. buti nalang talaga na discover ko yung FMUS sa tiktok kasi super ganda niya and very relevant ang mga scenario sa ating society. I hope na magpatuloy ka pang mag sulat dahil iyan ang magic mo! ✨

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Tapos nako mainlove kay Calvin at Ali, tapusin mona yung kay president