lorrenMc
Hello?
cravengull
Do you do requests? I’ve had a book in mind and wanted to possible share it with you
lorrenMc
I want to thank everyone for support on both of my fics! That means a lot, especially now <3
As many of you know I’m a healtcare worker and that’s why I have really zero time now to write something. Unfortunately. But I hope to come back soon and post something +to read incredible fics by my fav writers and friends!!
barbiecameltoe
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I just wanted to suggest a plot for you to write: 141 is assigned a task in which they have to capture a girl who is the brains of an operation and they eventually capture her and try to extract info out of her but she reveals WHY she did what she did abd its like EXTREMELY traumatic. I mean im talking an abusive father who also happened to be in the military and wanted a son but got two daughters instead and for that he hated them and their mother and treated them like shit even killing his daughter, the female character’s younger sister and trafficked the female character at a young age and how she was tortured during her time but she found a connection with whom she struck a deal to keep her mother safe from her father and the connection agrees in return of her services. Then she is asked to be the head of the operation. And upon hearing all this ghost is disturbed and moved because he can relate. Then 141 asks for her cooperation in exchange of finding her mother and the ACTUAL man behind the operation. Then a brigadier offers them his help and he is said to be very great at what he does. (He is actually the female character’s father but dhe doesnt tell anyone and also stars wearing a balaclava to stop him from recognising her) They go on the mission together and he sees his wife and she sees her mother and then the father holds the mother at gunpoint in front of everyone but steps in and hurts him and also calls him “dad” making everyone realise. Although her behaviour around him since the day he entered was obviously not normal and jumpy and ghost notices but still doesnt come to the conclusion until this scene. Ik this sounds cheesy or corny or dramatic and everything but its just the plot. Pls write it according to your will and change what needs to be changed. Also i love your progressive storyline in rebirth, however i wanted to suggest you to read phantom by @stbones. Just so you could get an idea of it all. The slowburn and portrayal of ghost.
lorrenMc
@barbiecameltoe for example my new fic “favor” is more more better (I mean quality of text because my English became better) but it’s a little bit different ghost there +it’s more drama than military thing. But I like it so much ugh
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barbiecameltoe
@lorrenMc NO OMG THE PLOT IS AMAZING ITS PERFECT. I havent finished it yet because i started yesterday itself but these are the plots i try to find. I hope you find the motivation someday to write more fire fics like this
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lorrenMc
@barbiecameltoe and by the way, rebirth unfortunately is not my favorite thing to share, cause it’s not even close to what I was planning for fic. I’m very lazy unfortunately but somehow I managed to finish it BUT it’s just bad quality
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rillussion
Okay so i was reading Rebirth then i came to boombayah chapter but now i know there is something bad happens after this so, now I started reading Favor to calm myself
lorrenMc
@rillussion hahahah welcome bby! Favor in my opinion is much much better sooo you made a good choice
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lorrenMc
Posting a new chap of „favor“ tomorrow!!!
orvay_si25
Hello, Ghost Girl. I wanted to say something I used to be shy about, so I’ll do it anyway… Maybe you’ve noticed my Arabic comments, and at first, I was embarrassed to leave any in Arabic on Rebirth. But I just wanted to tell you that your story has reached an Egyptian girl who reads it at night while doing some Taekwondo moves on her bed from the heat of the novel… So here I am, and with my Arabic comments, I’ll invade the comment section. Don’t feel strange if you can’t find the exact translation, because the Egyptian dialect might seem a bit complicated… Also, I love you. Rebirth has started to mean so much to me
imnotgayforyourmum
Just finished reading Rebirth;
I have been reading books for years and I have never been able to sit down and read a book in one go. But now I have, and it took me 11 hours. This was beautiful, so many emotions. Thank you so much for this incredible work! I will be definitely be following your journey with your other works.
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lorrenMc
@imnotgayforyourmum thank you so much! It motivates me a lot and that’s what I need right now ❤️
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lorrenMc
I’m so tireeed, I can’t even write new chap