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          Update: A part two of Uncle dale is currently in progress. Its called *the birthday party* 
          
          Details about; The Birthday Party - another year has pass, and lucy's father decides to throw a grand birthday bash, he invites a number of people, and his brother-Dale. 
          
          lucy has an early pre birthday encounter moment with dale. She is later, after the party left to clean, where she finds dale again. The moment gets heated and dale carries lucy to the spare bedroom. 
          
          Ella, one of lucys friends comes to assist lucy in dressing for her birthday bash, she ends up spending the night . She sleeps in lucys bedroom and is soon awoken by lucys moaning next door.
          
          Ella pushes the door and walks in on dale between lucy legs...
          
          What happens next ??? Comment what you think.. remember your votes, feed backs and comments are always needed. THANK YOU FOR READING.

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What do you think of my new story uncle Dale? 
          
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Here's an extract from my new short piece called uncle dale
          
          I have been watching the way you look at me ever since I was sixteen. I know it makes your dick get so hard, you have seen me masturbating in my room and I know you wanted me so bad since then- lucy.
          
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Guys please take a moment from your time, and have a view at my first ever short story called.." Uncle Dale". Am a new writer and would really appreciate your feedback on my work.
          
          Here's a little piece from the story, uncle dale
          
          I have been watching the way you look at me ever since I was sixteen. I know it makes your dick get so hard, you have seen me masturbating in my room and I know you wanted me so badly since then- lucy.

Please check out my first short, erotica piece. It's still a work in progress.  Am new here and a beginner writer.  Your feedbacks of this piece would be highly appreciated. 
          
          It's called My Bestfriend's girl by Lory.