loserpantz

I edited chapters “Dancing in the Sand” and “War of Blooms PT. 1”
          	Changes were minor for “War of Blooms PT. 1” I just fixed some grammar and made changes to what the characters said so they weren’t ooc.
          	For the Chapter “Dancing in the Sand” I added a part that includes why everyone forgot it was Ambers birthday in the first place (which is Yoimiya) just so the story would have more of a plot. I also fixed some of the things Amber and Eula said so they weren’t ooc.
          	(sorry for all these changes I keeping making im not exactly the best writer and I publish these stories before I take the time to see if I could make them better)
          	thanks for readings :-)

loserpantz

I edited chapters “Dancing in the Sand” and “War of Blooms PT. 1”
          Changes were minor for “War of Blooms PT. 1” I just fixed some grammar and made changes to what the characters said so they weren’t ooc.
          For the Chapter “Dancing in the Sand” I added a part that includes why everyone forgot it was Ambers birthday in the first place (which is Yoimiya) just so the story would have more of a plot. I also fixed some of the things Amber and Eula said so they weren’t ooc.
          (sorry for all these changes I keeping making im not exactly the best writer and I publish these stories before I take the time to see if I could make them better)
          thanks for readings :-)