rxndomness_
I read your pregnant short stories. I just have a little tip for you to gain more interest. Your thoughts don't really flow. I see a lot of things being left out. One day Tori and Cam are calling each other babe and another they hate each other and have girls hanging all over him. There is just no explanation at all as to stuff in between. Also it lacks emotion when they found out she was not dead they hugged and then went to go get ice cream where Nash found a date. If my best friend died I would be with her not getting a date. However I love your plot just think some editing would make it better.
loserxlameo
@rxndomness_ thanks babe, I started this when I was like 13, I'd like to say my writing slowly got better, it's a work in progress thank you for your input