lostinmarss

Updates to my book “DOVE” will continue soon, don’t worry!! I’m just watching episodes ahead again 

kingmoca

@ lostinmarss  take your time love. But really, i miss meleksima story so much 
          	  Trully i Will wait for forever for this masterpiece story ! <3
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white_wolf_lover

Okay, random question in terms of long term series goals (I don’t think I’ve asked this before, but sorry if I have): 
          
          Do you have any intention of not having certain princes die in your story? By that I mean, do intend to have Melekisma prevent any of their deaths or at least delay them? 
          
          For example, Mehmet died because of plotting by Mahidevran while Hürrem was missing. I think it was smallpox or poisoning by smallpox or something like that. Meleksima’s spy network could hear about that and she could prevent it from happening, you know? 
          
          I know you said that you intend to stay close to the series, but this is still a fanfiction and Melekisma’s presence has already prevented the death of Nilüfer. 
          
          If you still intend for the characters that died (historically speaking) to die, I’m fine with that. Meleksima’s reactions would probably add so much emotion to the story. 
          
          Sorry again if I already asked you this. 

white_wolf_lover

(Part1)
          Are you still going to show Nigar’s suicide attempt, or are we past that? Technically, it happened in Episode 41, but the story is now at the end of Episode 43 and about to enter Episode 44. Did it already happen, just offscreen like with Bali Bey and his wife? 
          
          Besides the confrontation about Leo, I’m excited to see the moment where Hatice needs comfort since Ibrahim is poisoned. In the show Hürrem comforted her, but I think Melekisma will do it instead for your story. She’s closer to Hatice than Hürrem, so I think it makes sense.
          
          I know that Suleiman will call Valide, Gülfem, & Mahidevran into his rooms soon and tell them they have to respect Hürrem. Will that still be about Hürrem or will it switch to Meleksima? If you do change it to her, will you switch out Gülfem for Hürrem? I’m pretty sure Gülfem already respects Melekisma, so she wouldn’t need to be reprimanded.
          
          Of course I’m excited for Aybige’s time in the harem. I’m pretty sure she’s there before Mustafa leaves, so she’ll have been in the harem for 3 years before he comes back I believe. But I do think she’ll be close to Melekisma and not Hürrem, so I don’t see her going out of her way to protect Hürrem when the burning happens. Will Melekisma stay in the harem for the burning, or will you have her on campaign with Suleiman (& I believe Mustafa)? 

white_wolf_lover

(Part 2)
            When Mustafa comes back and greets the women of the harem, will he call Melekisma “mother” in front of all of them? I think that’ll be an amazing moment because of what that means emotionally but also politically (it’ll almost be like how Osman saw Kösem as a mother).  I also think Melekisma will be proud of Mustafa when he does that ceremony to join the jassinaries. 
            
            Besides that, the Efsun arc is going to be a rollercoaster of emotion and harem intrigue. Hürrem will be recovering from getting burned, Suleiman will faint because he can’t handle Cihangir’s pain, Mahidevran will show her true colors within earshot of Valide & Suleiman, etc. There’s so much coming up, I know the inevitable cliffhangers are going to drive me crazy lol. 
            
            Anyway, sorry that got long. I can’t wait to see what you come up with. I’ll be on the lookout for your next update. Keep up the good work!!
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lostinmarss

Updates to my book “DOVE” will continue soon, don’t worry!! I’m just watching episodes ahead again 

kingmoca

@ lostinmarss  take your time love. But really, i miss meleksima story so much 
            Trully i Will wait for forever for this masterpiece story ! <3
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Sweet_Baby_Cakes_73

Heyyyy are you ok? Are taking a break from writing?

lostinmarss

I’ll make an announcement tomorrow!!
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Mystic-Wildflower

Hi! I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying your story. I've really loved reading it, and your writing has kept me completely invested in the characters and plot. I was also wondering if you have any idea when the next update might be. No pressure at all—I'm just excited to see what happens next! Hope you're doing well, and thank you for sharing your work.

white_wolf_lover

For the next update of Dove, I feel like we’ll see the aftermath of Meleksima confronting Mahidevran. Now, I don’t think she’ll get into any trouble, especially since she “punished” Mahidevran for a legitimate reason, trying to sow discord between the princes. Suleiman wouldn’t reprimand her for that, and Mahidevran can’t cry to Valide (at least in my opinion), because then it’ll come out that she tried to pit Mustafa against his brothers. Suleiman and Valide like unity within the dynasty, pitting princes against each other isn’t unity. 
          
          I also think we’ll finally get into the Nigar situation. So far, we’ve yet to see her suicide attempt, so I feel like that’s up next, which means we’ll also be getting into her marriage with Matrakçi. I still think (hopefully) that Nigar will be on Meleksima’s side by the time her marriage comes around since I can’t really see her joining Melekisma’s faction if a moment after that is chosen (it’s just hard to imagine in my opinion). Truthfully, as long as it’s before the time she was supposed to be pregnant with Ibrahim’s baby, I think something can be done to save her from his sphere of influence. Ibrahim can always be made to have an affair baby with someone else. 
          
          Then there’s the conflict happening in Crimea, which means Aybige will be making her appearance soon, and older Mustafa will be joining the story too. I can’t wait to see how an older Mustafa interacts with Meleksima. I feel like she’ll be a big help to Mustafa navigating his first romance in the series (Efsun). 
          
          The Burning Arc is close too, and I absolutely believe this is going to fall on Hürrem. Melekisma got her ambush in the woods, but there’s no way she’s getting the burning, the women in the harem actually like her, so I just can’t see it happening. 
          
          Anyway, there’s a lot of interesting stuff that’s coming up soon, so I’m excited to see how you change things up. Can’t wait for the next update! Keep up the good work!! 

white_wolf_lover

I definitely forgot to mention the confrontation between Valide and Hürrem about her past relationship with Leo too. That’ll be an interesting situation. Of course Suleiman won’t care the same way he did in the show, especially since he’s not married to Hürrem. 
            
            I can’t see this happening to Meleksima since she didn’t have a relationship with Leo. I could see Hürrem try and bring up Meleksima’s past relationship with the other guy, but he’s actually dead, so it was never going to be possible for him to come in contact with Meleksima. That means Meleksima’s loyalty can’t come into question.
            
            It’ll be interesting to see if Hürrem will try to bring Melekisma into her confrontation with Valide. Or maybe, Leo wrote about the man Melekisma liked and Valide will have a confrontation with her too. I can’t be sure, but I’m interested to see how you go about this situation.
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pjolovestories

I just hope that when the Firuze storyline comes, Suleiman won’t push Meleksima aside. Instead, I hope it will be a situation similar to the one with the princess. I don’t think Suleiman would ever cast Meleksima aside or treat her that way.

AmanyRaihanah16

@ pjolovestories  ohhh i really love drama
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lostinmarss

Don’t worry they’ll have fights but not like that 
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