lostinmarss
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Updates to my book āDOVEā will continue soon, donāt worry!! Iām just watching episodes ahead again
white_wolf_lover
Okay, random question in terms of long term series goals (I donāt think Iāve asked this before, but sorry if I have):
Do you have any intention of not having certain princes die in your story? By that I mean, do intend to have Melekisma prevent any of their deaths or at least delay them?
For example, Mehmet died because of plotting by Mahidevran while Hürrem was missing. I think it was smallpox or poisoning by smallpox or something like that. Meleksimaās spy network could hear about that and she could prevent it from happening, you know?
I know you said that you intend to stay close to the series, but this is still a fanfiction and Melekismaās presence has already prevented the death of Nilüfer.
If you still intend for the characters that died (historically speaking) to die, Iām fine with that. Meleksimaās reactions would probably add so much emotion to the story.
Sorry again if I already asked you this.
DianaKomleva
Hello. Would you like to know when the new part of the "Dove" fanfiction will be released?
white_wolf_lover
(Part1)
Are you still going to show Nigarās suicide attempt, or are we past that? Technically, it happened in Episode 41, but the story is now at the end of Episode 43 and about to enter Episode 44. Did it already happen, just offscreen like with Bali Bey and his wife?
Besides the confrontation about Leo, Iām excited to see the moment where Hatice needs comfort since Ibrahim is poisoned. In the show Hürrem comforted her, but I think Melekisma will do it instead for your story. Sheās closer to Hatice than Hürrem, so I think it makes sense.
I know that Suleiman will call Valide, Gülfem, & Mahidevran into his rooms soon and tell them they have to respect Hürrem. Will that still be about Hürrem or will it switch to Meleksima? If you do change it to her, will you switch out Gülfem for Hürrem? Iām pretty sure Gülfem already respects Melekisma, so she wouldnāt need to be reprimanded.
Of course Iām excited for Aybigeās time in the harem. Iām pretty sure sheās there before Mustafa leaves, so sheāll have been in the harem for 3 years before he comes back I believe. But I do think sheāll be close to Melekisma and not Hürrem, so I donāt see her going out of her way to protect Hürrem when the burning happens. Will Melekisma stay in the harem for the burning, or will you have her on campaign with Suleiman (& I believe Mustafa)?
white_wolf_lover
(Part 2)
When Mustafa comes back and greets the women of the harem, will he call Melekisma āmotherā in front of all of them? I think thatāll be an amazing moment because of what that means emotionally but also politically (itāll almost be like how Osman saw Kƶsem as a mother). I also think Melekisma will be proud of Mustafa when he does that ceremony to join the jassinaries.
Besides that, the Efsun arc is going to be a rollercoaster of emotion and harem intrigue. Hürrem will be recovering from getting burned, Suleiman will faint because he canāt handle Cihangirās pain, Mahidevran will show her true colors within earshot of Valide & Suleiman, etc. Thereās so much coming up, I know the inevitable cliffhangers are going to drive me crazy lol.
Anyway, sorry that got long. I canāt wait to see what you come up with. Iāll be on the lookout for your next update. Keep up the good work!!
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lostinmarss
Updates to my book āDOVEā will continue soon, donāt worry!! Iām just watching episodes ahead again
Sweet_Baby_Cakes_73
Heyyyy are you ok? Are taking a break from writing?
DianaKomleva
Hello. I would like to know when the sequel to the Meleksema fanfictions will be released? I am very interested in finding out what will happen next.
Mystic-Wildflower
Hi! I just wanted to say how much I'm enjoying your story. I've really loved reading it, and your writing has kept me completely invested in the characters and plot. I was also wondering if you have any idea when the next update might be. No pressure at allāI'm just excited to see what happens next! Hope you're doing well, and thank you for sharing your work.
white_wolf_lover
For the next update of Dove, I feel like weāll see the aftermath of Meleksima confronting Mahidevran. Now, I donāt think sheāll get into any trouble, especially since she āpunishedā Mahidevran for a legitimate reason, trying to sow discord between the princes. Suleiman wouldnāt reprimand her for that, and Mahidevran canāt cry to Valide (at least in my opinion), because then itāll come out that she tried to pit Mustafa against his brothers. Suleiman and Valide like unity within the dynasty, pitting princes against each other isnāt unity.
I also think weāll finally get into the Nigar situation. So far, weāve yet to see her suicide attempt, so I feel like thatās up next, which means weāll also be getting into her marriage with MatrakƧi. I still think (hopefully) that Nigar will be on Meleksimaās side by the time her marriage comes around since I canāt really see her joining Melekismaās faction if a moment after that is chosen (itās just hard to imagine in my opinion). Truthfully, as long as itās before the time she was supposed to be pregnant with Ibrahimās baby, I think something can be done to save her from his sphere of influence. Ibrahim can always be made to have an affair baby with someone else.
Then thereās the conflict happening in Crimea, which means Aybige will be making her appearance soon, and older Mustafa will be joining the story too. I canāt wait to see how an older Mustafa interacts with Meleksima. I feel like sheāll be a big help to Mustafa navigating his first romance in the series (Efsun).
The Burning Arc is close too, and I absolutely believe this is going to fall on Hürrem. Melekisma got her ambush in the woods, but thereās no way sheās getting the burning, the women in the harem actually like her, so I just canāt see it happening.
Anyway, thereās a lot of interesting stuff thatās coming up soon, so Iām excited to see how you change things up. Canāt wait for the next update! Keep up the good work!!
white_wolf_lover
I definitely forgot to mention the confrontation between Valide and Hürrem about her past relationship with Leo too. Thatāll be an interesting situation. Of course Suleiman wonāt care the same way he did in the show, especially since heās not married to Hürrem.
I canāt see this happening to Meleksima since she didnāt have a relationship with Leo. I could see Hürrem try and bring up Meleksimaās past relationship with the other guy, but heās actually dead, so it was never going to be possible for him to come in contact with Meleksima. That means Meleksimaās loyalty canāt come into question.
Itāll be interesting to see if Hürrem will try to bring Melekisma into her confrontation with Valide. Or maybe, Leo wrote about the man Melekisma liked and Valide will have a confrontation with her too. I canāt be sure, but Iām interested to see how you go about this situation.
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pjolovestories
I just hope that when the Firuze storyline comes, Suleiman wonāt push Meleksima aside. Instead, I hope it will be a situation similar to the one with the princess. I donāt think Suleiman would ever cast Meleksima aside or treat her that way.