lostinmarss

Wheel of time Fanfic? Love interest Moiraine Damodred?????! 

white_wolf_lover

I’ve really been enjoying your Magnificent Century fanfiction, Angle Face. I love how you’re really keeping everyone’s characterization the same while adding the element of Meleksima to the story. I’m really loving her as a character because she shows a good balance of knowing when interference is needed and when she needs to sit back and let things happen. Is Sumbul part of her faction? That’s what it feels like to me, but I could be wrong. Anyways, great job with your story so far. I can’t wait to see how you shape the story to fit Meleksima as, what I assume, the victor. I’ll be on the lookout for more updates (I love how you give 5 chapters at a time )! 

white_wolf_lover

(Part 4)
             I also see the break in Meleksima’s and Hürrem’s relationship happening at some point during all of these events. I think it’ll likely be when Suleiman frees Meleksima, or even more likely, when the marriage happens. But I think it’s more likely to happen before Suleiman gets married to Meleksima. 
            
            Sorry that this got so long, but these are just some aspects of the story I’m wondering about and brainstorming since they’re coming up soon. Can’t wait for your next update!  
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white_wolf_lover

(Part 3)
            The one thing I can’t really see happening to Meleksima would be the burning of her face. Hürrem isn’t well liked in the harem in the series or in your story, likely due to her attitude, but Meleksima is liked by many in the harem. She’s kind to everyone, setting her apart from Hürrem. Obviously, Mahidevran could still plan to have the concubines on her side burn both Meleksima and Hürrem, but I feel like since Meleksima has more people who protect her than Hürrem, it wouldn’t happen if Mahidevran does target both of them. 
            
            If feel like the burning of Hürrem’s face could realistically only happen to her due to how she’s perceived in the harem by the other women there. They would be more likely to agree to hurt the “arrogant witch” rather than the “kind angel-like Sultana” that doesn’t argue with everyone or rub her favor into everyone’s face. 
            
            I also know that Mustafa will be an adult soon, and that his relationship with Hürrem was bad since she sent a concubine to seduce him, then poison him, and that concubine ends up dying because they abort her pregnancy I believe. I don’t see Mustafa having issues with Meleksima the same way because she’s more clever about her planning. I done see her doing something reckless like this the Hürrem does reckless things, so Meleksima won’t have a hostile relationship with Mustafa the same way Hürrem does. I could see Mustafa actually respecting Meleksima since he doesn’t really see her fight with Mahidevran the same way Hürrem does. 
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white_wolf_lover

(Part 2)
            I firmly believe that Meleksima will be the one to marry Suleiman, so I’m pretty confident you’ll have her take Hürrem’s place in that. Which means Suleiman will free Meleksima in place of Hürrem, or free both of them. I can’t see Meleksima doing the same thing Hürrem does though, refusing to see Suleiman as she’s free and can’t lay with a man outside of marriage. I can see Hürrem doing that if you decide to free Hürrem too though. 
            
            I just feel like  Meleksima wouldn’t do something that would get her banished from the palace again, especially since she miscarried the last time. I can see Meleksima being smarter about getting Suleiman to marry her. 
            
            For example, I see her bringing it up to Suleiman’s face, feigning concern that she can’t lay with him anymore since she’s free. She may even try to have him “take it back” so that she could continue to lay with him. That could be used as show of her devotion to being with Suleiman that she would rather be a slave to keep being with him instead of being free. 
            
            I know it all stems from Hürrem wanting to do charity work in the series, so I’m interested to see how you’ll spin it. 
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DianaKomleva

Hello. I really like your fanfiction "The Face of an Angel". I'm waiting for the continuation. 
          I'm curious about the plot. Is Hurrem marrying Suleiman, as in the series, or not? But I hope that Meleksima will become the sultan's lawful wife anyway.

DianaKomleva

Will Meleksima become Suleiman's wife in the same way that Hurrem became? Or something else?
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lostinmarss

Meleksima will be his one and only wife. I know some Fanfics do the two wife thing but I’m not lol  
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jade_tns

Hey what's your update schedule is fixed or just when you have time. Loving the story by the way. I was also wondering if a story line could be retreated about hurrem or maidhvant plotting against melek and have it undone in front of sulieman where he makes an example of her to warn of people from going against her.

pjolovestories

Hi!❤️ I have a question about the book — will Hürrem have five children or fewer? I’m only asking because it seems like Meleksima has already taken her place in every bad situation (when Hürrem was beaten, and now when she’s been exiled). I’m just wondering, because I understand that Suleiman loves Hürrem now too, but it really seems to me that she’s just an affair for him, and Suleiman’s true love is Meleksima. ( I really hope that)❤️

lostinmarss

Hi  and Hürrem will have the same amount of children she had in the show but I plan for  Meleksima to continue to have kids even after Hürrem five 
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