NiNi5Horan

I really love the storyline of this book. What stands out to me the most is that, at its core, it's a story about family—more specifically, about the bond between brothers and how relationships can change when life changes.
          
          The way you've explored the struggles that arise after the elder brother's marriage feels very realistic. Relationships don't always break because people stop loving each other; sometimes circumstances change, misunderstandings grow, and people struggle to find their place again. I think you've captured that beautifully. Watching the brothers navigate the distance between them, deal with their emotions, make mistakes, and gradually work towards understanding each other has been one of the most compelling parts of the story.
          
          I also appreciate how you've written each character. Everyone has their own perspective, and because of that, it's easy to understand why they make certain choices, even when those choices create conflict. That balance is not easy to achieve.
          
          Your writing keeps me invested because it focuses on emotions that feel genuine rather than forced. The family dynamics, the tension, the moments of affection, and the attempts to mend relationships all feel natural and believable. It's refreshing to read a story that gives so much importance to sibling relationships and family bonds.
          
          Thank you for sharing this story with us. It's been a wonderful read so far, and I genuinely look forward to every update. I also hope you continue writing more stories in the future because you clearly have a talent for creating characters and relationships that readers can connect with. And if you ever decide to publish your work someday, you'll definitely have readers ready to support you—including me.

NiNi5Horan

@lotuslove111 Will surely read them ❤️
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lotuslove111

Omg thank u so much for ur kind words , it means a lot and I’m glad u liked my story and I will surely and hopefully write more stories with interesting plot , once again thanks and read my other stories as well, surely u will enjoy 
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mrinmoyiashraf

Hey author sorry to bother you. Actually I'm new to writing and don't know how my books will reach to readers that's why I'm posting it here. If you feel bothered you can remove it, or if possible please give it a try and give some feedback. Thank you and sorry again.
          Here is the link if you wanna try this book:
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410667227?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=mrinmoyiashraf

mrinmoyiashraf

@lotuslove111 Thanks, your kindness means a lot❤️ I already upload first chapter.
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lotuslove111

Hey , I will read ur book for sure 
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Lcake29

Hi author,how are you?Will you be continuing torn loyalties 

Lcake29

I am good too.I am glad you are continuing the story.I will be waiting for your update 
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lotuslove111

Hello I’m good , Wbu , yes dear i will continue this story soon 
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