Shy-Nim

Thank you so much for the vote on 'But I still want you' <3
          
          I'd be really happy if you could check out 'Mine' as well. I can promise that you won't regret it :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/312543453-%F0%9D%90%8C%F0%9D%90%A2%F0%9D%90%A7%F0%9D%90%9E-%F0%9D%90%8A-%F0%9D%90%93%F0%9D%90%87

tha_sharp_one

@love-me-life  I appreciate the feedback ❤️. It’s actually a “spoken word “ not a story. Like a sentence taken out of a movie, you get what I mean?! And when you say writing style, what do you  mean?
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love-me-life

@SarahBlackbearJonah
            
             I just finished reading your story, and it was really good- very short, but still enjoyable.
            
            i’d recommend making it longer if you want more people to stay engaged with your book. also, instead of using parentheses when your characters are speaking, I suggest using quotation marks to make the dialogue clearer.
            
            i loved the cover! If you’d like, you could take the picture and add your name or  title to it. You can do that easily on pinterest or other editing apps. But of course, it’s your story—so if you like it the way it is, that’s totally fine!
            
            Since you asked for feedback, here it is :)
            Overall, I really liked the story. It was interesting, and your writing style is amazing!!!!
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love-me-life

@SarahBlackbearJonah omg im so sorryyyy  i'll read ur story right awayyy
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