love_angell20

I've published 2nd chapter of his selfish love do read it and please share your opinions it motivates me and a little motivation is all I need this time.

chandini259

@love_angell20 ok i understand its all about main lead getting happy ending without being justified about their actions thats all, my questions about the justification of the actions committed by a male and female in the story not regarding male lead and a female lead, thats all, i mean when the male chracter hurts the female charater brutally still he ends up getting the good happy ending, but if the same thing a female does. male seeks comfort in other woman, the female character who was hurt by the male chracter could have done the same thing like falling in love with another man, i mean one ML QUESTIONS the character of his wife when he is clearly cheating on his wife still he gets happy ending, and other even rapes her knwingly still he gets together with his wife as if he is the one suffered and he is getting because he deserved that happy endinf, while the female character doesnt , instead her husband marries another one secretely abandones her and thinks about her while doing sex with the first wife sneaks in her room while the frst wife is having nightmares, so yeah i found it double standard, instead if he brought her directly infront of his family i wouldn't mind him , insted i would have applauded him for what he is done,, so i am just pointing discrimination on various level, but again ur the author ,u know ur story as have claimed , so i can only question not criticise as to why u did that? or why u did this, i hope u dont take it seriously
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chandini259

@love_angell20 i mean in ur books blinded by love and unknowingly halal, even though the female lead commits misdtakes and even sins, they get a happily even ending , u didnt show female lead loving other man even though he is good, but in his secret wife, sofia committed mistake so u made a happy ending with isha and arshad and what sofia got even she repented was just a consolation,i bet if sofia behaved like rumaan or the lead like unknowingly hala, arshad would have divorced her, i mean i clearly read that if women wont give men attention, they will go to other women, but if men do that women should with them only, thats where i dont uderstand,i mean blinded by love,the male lead questioned charcter of female lead and even cheated infront of her , but he still end up with her happily, thats what i am confused about, and unknowingly hala, ML RAPES FL, , but he still feels she is entitled where FL HAVE THE absolute freedom to get and choose any other goy, i bet MOMIN ki dua will be like that, i have no doubt dua cheating, momin will end up with her sister and this makes another case of polygamy,but even her father didnt still he got her mother
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chandini259

@love_angell20 author ur stories are good i am noticing some diffrences though, when a female lead commits mistake u make the male lead end up with another female then when the male lead makes the mistake u dont end up female lead with another male lead why? i wanted to know. because i have seen in ur book some male characters justify their actions although they committed mistakes but they get a happy ending with the female lead even they they make her suffer for a long time, but female lead dont . why? by the way i am not judging but questioning, u can feel free to answer or simply block i dont mind since its ur will. but as an reader i have also right to pose questions, if not criticise since u mentioned dont criticise, so am questioning
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taishum_alvi

First of all sorry for posting this here without permission.
          
          I would like to request you guys to check this book out for once. 
          
          Deceiver- A pretentious tempt 
          
          It is an adult 18+ book. 
          
          It's a Mafia story. The male protagonist Alexander is not a hero but a villain who falls in love with someone he was pretending to be in love with. 
          
          He kept his identity hidden all the while so he can make her fall for him but end up falling for her.
          
          
          Tropes ✯
          Grumpy x sunshine
          Age gap
          Fake relationship 
          Forced Marriage 
          Forced proximity 
          Secret identity 
          Opposite attracts
          Obsession
          Mafia lovestory

moon_simran4567

Hello everyone...
          Sorry to post here but being a new author i don't know how to reach more readers so hope u all will support... check the story once...So just read it and you will know... 
          
          
          Book: He is not mine I'm his 
          Author: @moon_simran4567
          
          ♡Tropes
          
          Slow romance 
          Villain love: touch and die
          Marriage of convenience
          Mafia x Doctor
          She fell first
          
          Twists and turns that will leave you breathless... Heart-wrenching moments that will make you cry...Triumphant victories that will make you cheer!!!!!
          
          Link:https://www.wattpad.com/story/368905399?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=moon_simran4567

Rishika_writes_4848

Hello author and everyone. I'm extremely sorry for sliding into your board, author. I'm a new writer.... If you guys are into dark romance. Please give my novel a try. 
          
          If you're into soft romance then checkout my other novel "North weds South" 
          
          Thanks. :))
          
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