love_death_stories

Hey guys! I just started a new story, and I'm trying really hard, so I'd like some feedback. Could you guys please read a little bit of my new title, "Lost?" There's only a couple chapters, but I really need some feedback, even- especially- if it's negative. Please read and comment!

love_death_stories

Hey guys! I just started a new story, and I'm trying really hard, so I'd like some feedback. Could you guys please read a little bit of my new title, "Lost?" There's only a couple chapters, but I really need some feedback, even- especially- if it's negative. Please read and comment!