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PSYCHO HUSBAND DANGEROUS OBSESSION
(Chapter 14 Update Complete✅)
IshqiyaWrites18
PratikPoudel774
Author how many chapters left for the rathore obsession
shiny_writings
Hey firstly I apologise to Author for promoting my story if it's not allowed
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### *CROWNS OF SHADOWS*
*TWO FRIENDS LIKE BROTHERS . TWO SECRET IDENTITIES. ONE WAR THAT WILL BURN THE WORLD.*
*Tagline:*
From London streets to New York skylines, from Milan mansions to the world’s deadliest mafia empires — 4 lives are destined to collide.
*What you’ll get:*
✓ *Childhood best friends →* Interpol Officer vs Mafia King
✓ *Billionaire CEO* who’s secretly the *Queen of a corporate syndicate*
✓ *Secretary girl* who falls for the most dangerous man in Europe
✓ *Brotherhood vs Justice vs Love*
✓ *International conspiracies, betrayal, and “I’ll burn the world for you” vibes*
*He’s the law. He’s the crime.*
*She’s the CEO. She’s the shadow queen.*
*And when their secrets come out... empires will fall.*
*Read here:* https://www.wattpad.com/story/413323726?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=shiny_writings
If you love *dark romance + crime thriller + secret identities + brothers by choice*, this is 100% for you.
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PSYCHO HUSBAND DANGEROUS OBSESSION
(Chapter 14 Update Complete✅)
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PSYCHO HUSBAND DANGEROUS OBSESSION (Chapter 13 Update Complete ✅)
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Burntflower12
Hey guys, sorry for using your community board
But I promise… this isn’t just another random story ❤️
What happens when
a girl who learned to survive in silence…
meets a man who was never taught how to feel?
If you’re into stories that pull you in slowly… and then refuse to let go
you might wanna check this out
Give it a chance — vote, comment, follow if it hits
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Nobiraaa
See author, I completely get you point over the book, "the rathores obsession" that you wanted to make a male lead and show his character development.
But you need to understand this very simple thing author some things are not meant to be forgived.
Some character developments doesn't erase things that is done already.
I have read the whole book and I didn't judge you after reading just few chapters but even after reading the whole book I'm just unable to like the male lead.. Somethings just can't be fixed..
Kissing her without her permission, forcing her and being a manwhore.. No matter what but no character development can justify it..
Sorry to say but it was so damn disgusting.
love_story70871
@Nobiraaa There is also one thing many readers misunderstand. Veer was never written as someone who went around forcing himself on random women. Throughout the story, women were the ones who chased him. His biggest mistake was with **Ananya**, when his ego and obsession made him cross boundaries by kissing her without her consent. That was wrong, and I have never tried to justify that moment. The reason I showed his character changing afterward was because, for the first time in his life, he truly understood what love meant. Once he realized he genuinely loved Ananya, he stopped wanting to control her through force and instead started learning to care about her feelings and her pain. His love became softer than his obsession. Whether readers forgive him after that is completely their choice. I don't expect everyone to. Some readers never will, and I respect that. When I said Ananya has self-respect, I didn't mean that every woman with self-respect must make the same decision. Different women make different choices based on their own emotions, experiences, and circumstances. You may believe she should have left forever, while another reader may believe her choice was believable. Neither opinion is the only possible one. Finally, thank you for telling me not to lose confidence. I really appreciate that. ❤️ I don't hate criticism, and I never will. If I make mistakes as a writer, I'll happily learn from them and improve. What hurts me isn't criticism of my story—it's when people stop talking about the story and start attacking me personally. Those are two very different things. Thank you again for reading my book until the end and for sharing your thoughts respectfully. Even if we don't agree on everything, I respect your opinion.
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love_story70871
@Nobiraaa Thank you for your honest opinion and for taking the time to explain it respectfully. ❤️ I truly appreciate readers who criticize my **story** without personally attacking me. First, I want to clarify something. I never wrote this story to say that character development, suffering, or a redemption arc can erase the past. That was never my message. What Veer did in the beginning was wrong, and I have never tried to tell my readers that it suddenly became right because he changed later. The past always remains a part of him. But where we see the story differently is in **why** Veer became the person he was. I'm not asking anyone to forgive every person who has done something wrong. I'm especially **not** saying that rapists or abusers should be forgiven simply because they change. That has never been my point. For me, Veer and someone like Bheem Singh are completely different characters. Bheem's mind is rotten. He hurts people because that is who he is. Veer, on the other hand, grew up in an environment where obsession was treated as love, possessiveness was treated as protection, and no one ever taught him the difference between right and wrong. His family, the people around him, and the world he grew up in shaped him into the man he became. That doesn't excuse his actions, but it explains why he became that way.
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Nobiraaa
@Nobiraaa You are a very good writer.. Just please don't lose your confidence and think bad about yourself .. You are meant to learn things.. People are criticising you because you have made a mistake.. Yess, it was a mistake of you to think that a character development can justify something like that , but you don't have to take the critic comments like this.. Take it positively to improve yourself.. Improve your mindset..... I mean to say the mindset of you thinking that character development, redemption arc and his dark past can erase the things which is already done.. You just have to improve this.. That's itt.. May you in real life you forgive people when you see good changes in them and trust me you are not wrong but some mistakes can never ever be forgived.. I'm just trying to make you understand this thing.
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