loveableleahhh

Gize unuh guh read ee book nuh trust dis a do over yah betta dan ee original 

Yo Gizee im backkkkkk and imma be coming out with a new book but lemme know if i should continue young and reckless but with less lustful and sinful stuff or do you want a reboot any way IM BACK BABYYY

Mi Nuh know why but mi doh have no motivation fih update ee book

Guys my last chapter wasn't as good as I wanted it to be so I'mma do a longer more interesting chapters for yall

드디어 한국어를 배웠어요 ! 

Tysm for 3k reads on young nd reckless love yall so much 
                                                  Xoxo, Leah

Prob gonna update today so keep watch

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          If yuh can read dis yuh know wah guh happen next Inna ee book

Hey mama, okay so I’m not here to judge but give constructive criticism because we all need help to better our craft. First thing first love the first chapter! I see where you know what you want to get at, but the wording is a bit hard to understand or read. Like I know what you’re saying but it’s all over the place. Learn to word stuff properly not saying type in standard English but just write it better
          
          Example 
          
          “Ashley mek we go desso nuh,” she turns to em. “Why,?” “Because dem bwoy yah nice bad! Like ugh” she looks to where I was staring. “Hmmm,”
          
          She mumbles making me laugh. “Right,!” 
          
          Just type like this. Don’t add these “….” It’s not a good look. Don’t draw out anything get to the point. The first chapter should get the readers attention and have them wanting more. Learn to use emotive words, could be something sad idk
          
          But draw emotions okay. Too much pictures, pictures are great to have but it’s more images than words it takes away from everything you want them to get. So just make everything better, ummm I think that’s all
          
          Otherwise you’re doing amazing!  keep up the good work 

New book coming outttt❤