loveatfirstfiction

Hey, everyone, so I wrote this short story slash diary entry. Please read and tell me what I should improve.

loveatfirstfiction

Hi Guys! 
          So recently i started reading this book on wattpad. It's called "The young street racer that races for vengeance" its acrually a great book. It's already at it's 4th chaper. Please go check it out? The author is JeanEls3. Thank you Lovelies