lovecharm56

Hey guys if you guys can read It and tell me your honesty opinion 
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/167108347

JulieSciarrillojacks

Hey love ur story but it would be even better if Mr. U paid the DNA person to say that miles isn't the father since he has the money to do it.  That's if u didn't write the next chapter. But anyway it is awesome

JulieSciarrillojacks

@JulieSciarrillojacks that would be a great twist. Yes i watch too many soaps they do it all the time 
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lovecharm56

Thank you for that idea
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lovecharm56

The shattered version of you, I can draw every crack that lived inside of your soul. I had read you like book, I had breathed you in like you were my last breath. I fell in love with contract of your brown skin against mine. I'm lost in the universe of you, everything that you. I don't know where I begin, or where you end. 

lovecharm56

She'll paint you a picture , I will write you a story, 
          
          she will set your world on fire, but I'll be the hurricane the blow you away, 
          
          She'll be the War and I'll get the peace calm that  will calm you the night, 
          
          You'll will be her Ranger Rick, but you'll be my cowboy, 
          
          I'll be your sunshine, she'll be your moonlight, 
          
          She'll be a history, but I'll be a future
          
          Under the star, you'll kiss me and cheek paint red with regret, But you leave you want more, 
          
          Because You don't know it yet but you can't have the sun without the moon,