Hey, darling! I wanted to tell you how well you did on the book, “The House”. The horror that follows with adrenaline, and suspense to figure out what happens next, always gets me on edge, well done! Although, one thing that didn’t fancy me was how you went straight into the deep action. In a book, you want your readers to get a good grasp of who your character is before you give them action. You can start out with mild action, but you went pretty forceful, and that’s okay. For your second chapter, just calm it down a bit, have the characters be explained more, have what’s happening be more understood so the reader can get a better grasp on what’s going on. I applaud this piece, it’s rather unique, I must say.