lovefuz09

I haven’t been updating The House due to the amount of school work I have! I will update the next chapter ASAP! As for those who have not read The House do check it out and tell me how you think about it :)) Have a good one and stay safe everyone!! ❤️

lovefuz09

I haven’t been updating The House due to the amount of school work I have! I will update the next chapter ASAP! As for those who have not read The House do check it out and tell me how you think about it :)) Have a good one and stay safe everyone!! ❤️

amarANNEth

Hi! I'll really appreciate it if you will read my story. I'm open for feedbacks. Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/223208294-a-little-braver

lovefuz09

@amarANNEth Sure I’ll check it out:) But do you mind checking out my new book too? It’s entitled The House. 
            
            https://my.w.tt/BvlZqnRoj6
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Blksallion

Hey, darling! I wanted to tell you how well you did on the book, “The House”. The horror that follows with adrenaline, and suspense to figure out what happens next, always gets me on edge, well done! Although, one thing that didn’t fancy me was how you went straight into the deep action. In a book, you want your readers to get a good grasp of who your character is before you give them action. You can start out with mild action, but you went pretty forceful, and that’s okay. For your second chapter, just calm it down a bit, have the characters be explained more, have what’s happening be more understood so the reader can get a better grasp on what’s going on. I applaud this piece, it’s rather unique, I must say.

Blksallion

Of course!! I’m so happy to see such good writing come from you! I’ll be looking forward to those messages in the future! Good luck, and God bless!!!
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lovefuz09

Thank you so much for such detailed feedback! I’ll try my best for the future chapters and I might be needing your guidance again! Really grateful for your encouragement :”
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ionsce

Hey would you mind checking out my new story? It's entitled A Prisoner of Time. Hoping for feedbacks :)
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/223979142-a-prisoner-of-time

lovefuz09

@lonsce Yes of course! Do check out mine too! I’m a starter so hope to learn from one another :”)
            
            
            https://my.w.tt/Yz2EwJLHh6
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lovefuz09

I have updated my remaining *unedited* chapters of my Fairy Tail fan-fiction. And I have finally decided to discontinue the book. Do enjoy the rest of the story, I apologise for any mistakes since it’s unedited.